Example of writing a descriptive essay : describing a person :

Example of writing a descriptive essay : describing a person :

       My best friend’s name is Laura jones. she is a twenty-two year-old and she studies biology at the university of London. However, she is not English. In fact, she was born in the south of Australia. when Laura first moved to our university, the other guys avoided her; but now everyone want to keep her company. so, what is her secret? Why does everyone like her?

       Laura is a slim girl and a very tall one; I think she is tallest of all my friend she’s good a curly black hair, which is not that long. she also has a round face on which the charming smile is usually drawn. Laura as got also pretty brown eyes. concerning her cloth, she is usually puts on casual clothes, such as jeans and t-shirts. that’s the case since she doesn’t like classic clothes that make her not at ease.

       As for Laura’s abilities, she loves all kinds of sports and she is very good at them. she plays golf twice a week she also enjoys riding her bike with the university basketball team. Not only this, but this girl sings quite well while playing guitar, which makes her have fun with her friend. We can only say that she is really a talented and cleaver person.

        More than that, Laura is a cheerful and optimistic person. she is sociable and enjoys meeting new people and sharing nice moments with them. Additionally, Laura is really reliable; that is to say, if any of us has a problem , she suggests suitable  solutions and can help at any time . this is due to being caring and kind . By the way, Laura loves animals .The last time I saw her , she had I don’t know how many pets .         

          All these positive characteristics and many others made me love Laura and made all her friends be attached to her from the first time they met her. However , as we all know, no one is perfect, and Laura isn’t either. Her only flaw is that she is very moody; she can be very happy and excited , and then , after few seconds , you can see her sad and upset . Nonetheless , these are the moments when she mostly needs her friends as they always find her here. That’s normal; a friend in need is a friend indeed!

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Writing a descriptive essay: describing a person:

Writing a descriptive essay: describing a person:

                           I.            Introduction:

·      name/age/job/velation…

·      why did you choose that person

              II.        body:

ü physical description

ü mental abilities

ü personality/attitudes

           III.        conclusion :

Ø Person vieuw about the person

Ø Say what are some of his/ her defects.

Physical traits:

Age:(young, elderly, teenager/ adolescent, middle-aged…) Height( tall, short, medium…) Build(thin, slim, skinny, slender, obese, fat, muscular…) Skin:(Dark-skinned, black-skinned, white, pale…) Face( round, oval, long, wrinkled, sun-tanned, beard, mustache, beauty-mark, with freckles…etc) Eyes( blue, green, brown, grey, big, small, round, narrow, brilliant,…etc) Clothes: (elegant, well-dressed, fashionable, tidy, messy, casual, conservative…)

Intellectual abilities :

Intelligent , bright , clever , smart , brainy , brilliant , gifted , talented , hard-working , successful , he/she plays sport … he/she sing , plays music , instrument , sews ( خياطة ( , gardens …etc

Attitude/personality :

Optimistic/pessimistic  , extroverted/introverted                                                                                             

Relaxed/tense   or   nervous ,  sensible, sensitive , unsociable , open-minded / close-minded , honest/dishonest , sincer/trust-worthy , reliable , quiet/calm , shy/reserved , self-confident , cheerful , rude/impolite , polite , respectful/disrespectful , friendly/nice , selfish/caring , talkative …… etc

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writing : cause and effect

writing : cause and effect :                              
                          -because
                          -because of
    Effect            - due to                         cause






                          - thanks to                  
                          -since

                           -as a result
                       -as a consequences
  Cause           -therefore                            effect
                       - consequently           
                         


Examples:
·      Another car hit it because the car a red light.
·      The students were quiet in class. Therefore; the gave then a reward.

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How to write an article :

       

How to write an article :

step by step
you write a good article

  I.        Introduction :
·      Introductory sentence.
·      Open question.
II.        Body development :
·      Advantages.·      Disadvantages.
III.        conclusion :
·      give personal opinion.

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Advantages and disadvantages of using internet :

Advantages and disadvantages of using internet :

            If there were a vote for the thing which had  influenced  people’s lives most in the 21 century, it is no doubt that there are few things more deserving of the words “ most significant” than the internet.

             With the rapid development of network science and technology, the application of the internet already extended  to each aspects of people’s life and has gradually become a necessary part of our lives . also the internet brings convince to our studying , working , living and make our lives more interesting and varied , however , it also has deep influence on our behaviour and mind , at the same time lots new challenges are brought to our original way of live . however , since the internet be born , it is generally acknowledges that the internet is a two-edged sword and has disadvantages as well as advantages .

Internet is the invention of modern and high technology science . it provide us amazing facility of searching any information of any corner of the world by anyone , we can connect more than one computer to each other using this internet in order to easily access information from any connected computer from one place . using internet we can send any big or small message, information very quickly with in seconds to anyone’s computer, mobile, or other digital device like tablets, PC, etc .. it is a vast storage of information as it has more than billions of running websites, related to the domestic business, academic, governmental, etc .. we can say it is a network of networks.

Every thing in the world has it own to side, the internet

Is no exception . today ,the internet  is a widespread information medium of communication . its appearance like a double edged sword, not only bring convenience to mankind but also may causes a great deal of potential problems too .

How to deal with internet crime ?

How to protected the netizens internet security ?

How to correctly guide the young people to proper use the network ?

     According to many studies of internet users especially youth have conclude that spending too much time online can adversely effect their psychological well-being  .

Consequently , new technology bring the lifestyle to people , at the same time how to make most use of the internet becomes an urgent issue.

   Which if misused , might under the quality of our life and ever threaten the mental health of teenager student .

     In conclusion we can not say with the absolute certainty that the internet  does good or harm to our life . the internet is just like a double-edged sword . whether it does good or harm to people’s life depend on how we exploit it and how the internet inspire human intelligence . the most difficult question for the future of the internet is not how the technology will change but how the people will change with the progress of the technology .

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Linking words:

Linking words:

Enumeration	Illustration
·      First-firstly ·      To star with ·      To begin with ·      First of all	·      Such as ·      For exemple ·      Like ·      To illustrate ·      For instrance
Addition	Concluding
·      Moreover ·      In addition to that ·      Not only … but also ·      Further more ·      What’s more	·      To conclude ·      As a conclusion ·      Finally ·      To sum up ·      As a summery

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How to write a paragraph :

How to write a paragraph :

Topic sentence	Ø  The first sentence. we introduce the topic.
Supporting sentence	Ø They are used to support the topic sentence with ideas.
Developing sentence	Ø They are sentence which are used to develop the supporting sentence with explanation examples.
Closing sentences	Ø The last sentence in the paragraph we paraphrase the topic sentence.

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